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Devices
for Writing Speeches
Vivid words and
picturesque language can bring a presentation
alive. Incorporating some of the devices listed
below will enhance any presentation. This is
generally done as the final stage of the writing
process.
Alliteration
Judicious use of
alliteration heightens the effectiveness of any
phrase. An alliterative phrase (where two or
more words in a phrase start with the same
letter or sound) gives the speaker something to really
emphasise which makes that part of the
presentation more memorable for the audience.
For example: fast and
furious, hip hop, swinging sixties, people
power.
Catchphrases
A catchphrase is anything that ‘catches’
the attention and sticks in the memory. They are
generally short, often humorous, and can
significantly enhance the ‘memorability’ of
a speech. They can come from anywhere -
advertising slogans, bumper stickers, T-shirts.
Catchphrases often use other devices such as
alliteration, assonance and puns to enhance
their ‘catchiness’.
Examples:
‘I have a dream’ (Martin
Luther King)
‘Make my day’
(Clint Eastwood)
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Juxtaposition
The dictionary meaning
is to place one thing beside another. In
speaking terms, this involves placing two
opposites together to create a more dramatic
impact. It is based on the principle that many
things become clearer in contrast - just as
black looks more dramatic against a white
background and white looks ‘whiter’ against
a black one. Some classic examples of
juxtaposition have been used by Presidents of
the USA:
John F
Kennedy: ‘Ask not
what your country can do for you. Ask what you
can do for your country.’
Bill Clinton:
- ‘There is nothing that’s wrong with
America that can’t be fixed by what’s right
with America.’
Metaphors
& Similes
Metaphors are based on
describing one thing as something different, yet
similar in one key aspect. For example, when an
aggressive player is said to be a tiger,
or when a classroom is said to be a torture
chamber. Similes work on the same principle,
except one thing is said to be ‘like’
something else. For example: Like lambs to
the slaughter, our team ran onto the field.
Metaphors and similes are extremely effective in
speeches. This is because they are so
picturesque. An imaginative phrase can paint a
very vivid picture in the mind of the audience
member. e.g The
decision hung above him like an angry storm
cloud. Public fraud is a cancer eating at the
foundations of our society.
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Quotations
Any direct quotation should be attributed (ie.
the person who made it needs to be mentioned.) The primary
criterion of a good quote is its relevance to your subject.
However the person who made the quote is also a significant
factor. In order of preference select quotes from:-
- One of the characters from your speech,
particularly if they are well known or are seen as having
some authority on the subject.
- Any person well enough known to the
audience not to require a description. This -includes well
known public figures like Gandhi, Martin Luther King,
Churchill etc.
- Any person well enough known to the
audience who can be described adequately in one or two
words, for example, the author Bryce Courtney, pioneering
aviator Emilia Earhart, radio personality John Laws.
- Any other person. The disadvantage of using
these is that you can spend a lot of time explaining who it
is you are quoting which could distract the audience from
your point.
Signposts
It is very easy for an audience’s attention to
wander. Having regular ‘signposts’ that
point the way or signal a change in direction to
the audience help them to keep up. Some good
examples –
In the opening: What I’m
going to do today is cover three aspects of this
very important subject
During the
presentation: So, let’s
look at what we have covered so far.
In the conclusion: The
most important point of all is…
If you only remember
one thing, make sure it is this.
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Triplets
In speaking, a certain amount of
repetition adds impact and forcefulness to your presentation.
Repetition is certainly used much more in writing a speech than
it would be used in other writing.
A triplet is based on the principle that for some reason
listeners find this repetition most effective in ‘bunches’
of three. If only two are used, a sufficient pattern of
repetition is not established for it to have its effect.
Somehow, four seems too many for most situations.
So, the idea of a triplet is to involve some degree of
repetition. Triplets can come in a number of ways.
Firstly, they can be used to add more
information. Each time you add a new point, with the final
(third) point as the main one:-
‘I was tired. I was cold. I was prepared to do anything to get
a room for the night.’
‘This practice is cruel, it’s wasteful and, most of all, it’s
giving our children the wrong idea of what this world is about.’
Other ways of using triplets are:
- repeating a word/phrase - so much ... so
much ... so much …
- using three verbs - it has been
engineered for … designed for … and built for …
- using three nouns - every house, every
building, every apartment. .’
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These hints and many more are
contained in the book 'Speaking and Debating
with Style' by Kevin Ryan & Adrian Pauley
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